What have you learned from the feedback that you have received?
- To pin point my clear direction and argument in the introduction with some key evidence.
- Relate back to my specific image more obviously as evidence.
- Use less online sources and more academic texts. Use met search and Athens to help. Also use texts provided. Relating back to subcultures in general rather than specifically for Hippies.
- talk about wider concepts and ideas rather than staying so close to the topic bring in a range of sources and arguments.
How do you propose to move forward with this advice and feedback?
- Start finding academic texts that would be useful to my essay
- Start doing some wider reading around my subject to give me contextual knowledge
- Consider which pictures I might use, and what I want to cover in those pictures.
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