What have you learned from the feedback that you have received?

  • To pin point my clear direction and argument in the introduction with some key evidence.
  • Relate back to my specific image more obviously as evidence.
  • Use less online sources and more academic texts. Use met search and Athens to help. Also use texts provided. Relating back to subcultures in general rather than specifically for Hippies.
  • talk about wider concepts and ideas rather than staying so close to the topic bring in a range of sources and arguments.

How do you propose to move forward with this advice and feedback?

  • Start finding academic texts that would be useful to my essay
  • Start doing some wider reading around my subject to give me contextual knowledge
  • Consider which pictures I might use, and what I want to cover in those pictures.

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